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Digital Dimension - Episode 1 Episode 1: "Episode 1"

  It was a normal morning in Rose County. The date was Thursday, June 12, the day before school ended for the summer. Faye was walking down the street on her way to school, humming a happy tune. It was not long before she saw her friend Valerie in the distance. Faye ran to her, shouting, "Hey!"

"Good morning, Faye!" Valerie replied. "How are you doing today?"
"I'm doing great. Though I had a scary dream last night."
"Really?"
"Yeah," Faye nodded. "I was in this elevator, for some reason. I think it was a hotel or something...and the elevator, it got stuck between two floors. The lights turned off, but the music...
Vultopia 3-1: Dreams
"Ugh..." I stood up, slowly, and looked around to find myself locked in a cage. "How the hell did I get here?" I asked myself. I looked at myself - my legs were cut up, and had fur on them. "Fur?" I thought. My paws...I stopped looking after noticing them. I then looked over myself, and noticed that I had fur all over me, and tails...six of them. "This is odd," I thought. "How did I become like this all of a sudden? And how did I get here? Most importantly, how do I get OUT?" I didn't remember anything before then. Just waking up...inside a cage.

I walked to one end of the cage and shouted, "Hello? Anyone there?" I waited, and there was no

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Finally got around to finishing the second chapter. Took longer than I wanted to, but that could be blamed on laziness and me falling ill during the past couple days.

Two more members get added to the party in this chapter. Then, Flare introduces a new "friend" to them.

It's amazing how many female characters I have. xD
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~Miakas-sister Nov 6, 2009   Traditional Artist
Don't feel like you need to submit them for a specific deadline. Take your time, dear. :)
Very nice story so far :heart: it's good that you take your time to unravel your story. Many beginning writers try to get to cut to the action and don't give enough insight to the characters.
Are you taking a writing class?

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~Samuikon Dec 24, 2009
Thanks! I'm going to get back to work on this again soon. RL issues came up, so I had to get those taken care of.

I'm not taking a writing class, though I think I should.

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~Miakas-sister Dec 25, 2009   Traditional Artist
Yeah, take a writing class. I've taken one in
high school and one in college. I didn't have
the best teachers but the classes still really
helped my writing.

Good luck, and keep practicing. You're doing
great :heart:

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